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10 March 2008

My first Sea Cucumber Haiku

Holothurian
Will eviscerate itself
if you tread on it


Hmm perhaps a bit lame. I will try better next time
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5 comments:

  1. elasticwaistbandlady11:23 am

    The word "eviscerate" makes me gag for some reason.

    But sea cucumbers make me smile.

    Your haiku has struck a nice balance with me!

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  2. Agnes4:58 pm

    Try a limerick, please.

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  3. jmb10:52 pm

    Oh no, are there 480 pages of these to follow? I think you can only get better. That said I could not even do as well as that one.

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  4. The Lone Beader®2:15 am

    Interesting choice of words for a haiku. LOL. I used to write haikus all the time, but haven't been inspired to lately.

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  5. jams o donnell7:42 am

    AH I will have to try harder. Okay Red. A Sea Cucumber limerick will follow.

    Your haikus are beautiful LB

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