10 March 2008

My first Sea Cucumber Haiku

Holothurian
Will eviscerate itself
if you tread on it


Hmm perhaps a bit lame. I will try better next time

5 comments:

elasticwaistbandlady said...

The word "eviscerate" makes me gag for some reason.

But sea cucumbers make me smile.

Your haiku has struck a nice balance with me!

Redwine said...

Try a limerick, please.

jmb said...

Oh no, are there 480 pages of these to follow? I think you can only get better. That said I could not even do as well as that one.

The Lone Beader said...

Interesting choice of words for a haiku. LOL. I used to write haikus all the time, but haven't been inspired to lately.

jams o donnell said...

AH I will have to try harder. Okay Red. A Sea Cucumber limerick will follow.

Your haikus are beautiful LB